At today’s workshop, “Re-Thinking Our Response,” IWR faculty Christiane Donahue and Sara Chaney reflected upon their methods for responding to student papers.
Responding to student papers is arguably a writing teacher’s greatest challenge. We put hours of work into crafting responses and correcting errors, worrying over whether or not the comments help, wondering if our students are even paying attention. The good news is that recent studies show us that our comments do in fact make a difference to young writers—if these comments work to create a conversation between instructor and student. At today’s workshop, co-sponsored by DCAL and the Institute for Writing and Rhetoric, IWR faculty Christiane Donahue and Sara Chaney reflected upon their methods for responding to student papers. Professor Donahue offered a model for responding to student papers across the course of the term—a model that is designed so that students will be able to transfer and develop their capabilities across assignments. Professor Chaney demonstrated a way of using an audio feature in Microsoft Word to comment on student papers. Both instructors understood response as a way of establishing an ongoing conversation with their students.
Christiane Donahue’s method for responding works in concert with scaffolded writing assignments. In the interest of time, Professor Donahue shared only three “beats” of her course-long method with us. The first occurs on the first draft of the first paper. Professor Donahue grades the paper but withholds the grade from the students, telling them that they should read the comments first. If they want the grade, she’ll release it to them—but once they’ve learned their grade, they can’t revise the draft. Students read over the comments together, discussing them with one another, as they try to make up their minds about whether or not to take their grades. The strategy is very clever—it ensures that students thoroughly weigh out Professor Donahue’s comments. To date, no one has ever asked for the grade, opting to revise instead.
The second method, which Professor Donahue uses to respond to the second draft of the second paper, involves writing (in addition to individual responses) a shared commentary for the class. The class then discusses that shared commentary, together. This method is effective, in that it generates a conversation about writing (moving students away from thinking only about their own papers). It also demonstrates to students that they are not alone in their struggles to write well.
The third method, which Professor Donahue employs on the last draft of the third essay, offers an end comment that identifies things that the student has done well, along with things that she still needs to work on. This set of comments serves as the standard for the student’s final paper, allowing students to have a clear sense of what they need to work on. It also helps students to see what they are doing well, and to transfer these capabilities to the next assignment. Overall, Professor Donahue’s methods of response come together to form a term-long conversation about writing.
Sara Chaney’s method for responding also seeks to understand any response to a particular paper in the context of a larger conversation about writing. Professor Chaney thinks that using audio technology is an easy and effective way to connect margin comments to this larger discussion. Indeed, it does seem easier for instructors to join their remarks to this larger conversation when speaking than when confined to writing in the margins.
To demonstrate this point, Professor Chaney offered us an example of audio commentary that she had produced for a student paper. She then invited instructors to try the method for themselves. While some participants reported initial discomfort and self-consciousness, others immediately saw that this method of response offered its own set of benefits—particularly in engaging students with early drafts, where their ideas are still forming.
Do students like receiving audio comments? Studies show that they do. In fact, students reported that they prefer audio commentary—they are able to internalize it more easily, and they simply “feel differently” about it. It seems to this observer that the method has real potential—not only as a means for instructors, but as a technology that could enhance peer review.
Overall, today’s workshop offered several ideas to think over and several methods to steal. Just another day at DCAL, I guess!